Happy kids


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Patryk

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Okay, in my honest opinion, composition is weak. Only one of them seems happy, and the rest are left in total ambiguity. Try to capture a better moment where you can get the essence of what is happening.
 

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you have to crop tighter and concentrate more on their facial expressions....juz my two cents....every1's style is different..
 

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You wanted to portray "happy kids" right? So go get really happy faces, their expressions. What you got here is 1 happy kid, 3 others doing something, all sniped from around a bush or a bench (guessing). This picture doesn't do any justice to the caption though, just a passing snap.

//just giving an honest opinion, bLight. Hope you take it positively.//
 

bLight

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Azure said:
You wanted to portray "happy kids" right? So go get really happy faces, their expressions. What you got here is 1 happy kid, 3 others doing something, all sniped from around a bush or a bench (guessing). This picture doesn't do any justice to the caption though, just a passing snap.

//just giving an honest opinion, bLight. Hope you take it positively.//

No prob, will shot more to improve. :) Thanks all for your comments.
 

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