hey hey, thanks for the feedback. after evaluating , I agreed with your pointers - guess I push the spectrum a little too much this time.JermsDayOut said:hmmm.. SniperD, after i attended Sarah Silver's workshop, i understood that white's that are too white ain't too good. so in this case, perhaps, meter off slightly more to the left of the girl (towards the light) would be better. just my thoughts... if you attended the workshop, i think you'll get what i mean?
as for the feel.. it exudes innocence and curiosity of the subject to why she's being taken. very nice. brings out the moment through her expression