girl at esplande

[my_anata_des]

comments are welcome...

http://www.pbase.com/image/30132199

http://www.pbase.com/image/30132213

 

[yellowfinsg]

Cannot see the pictures~!

 

[nicholaslee]

can't see picture????

 

[my_anata_des]

done...try again

 

[clive]

very good angle :thumbsup:

 

[ziploc]

Hi my_anata_des,

I like the second pic - the side lighting is great, and I like her expression and her messy hairs which show the lighter/relax side of city people in a normally fast pace city life, but her ring and (especially the) watch really spoil the pic. The first pic doesn't really work for me as the camera angle doesn't really bring out any thing.

 

[Jazer]

i quite like the 2nd one .. there is a relaxed mood and the moment was there.

 

[fred2]

I am mindful that a photographer should try to bring out the best in every subject. In this case the girl has uneven teeth which doesn't appeal. It would be better to ask her to smile with her mouth closed so that the uneven teeth does not show.
I suppose, you just wanted to emphasise the spontanity.

 

[my_anata_des]

I am mindful that a photographer should try to bring out the best in every subject. In this case the girl has uneven teeth which doesn't appeal. It would be better to ask her to smile with her mouth closed so that the uneven teeth does not show.
I suppose, you just wanted to emphasise the spontanity.

im fully aware of the uneven teeth, though i did have the intention of
PSing it, which is easily done. But after much thought, i decided not to do
so as i like the imperfect beauty. Not all things in life is perfect as we really
wanted to.

So any other comments to add like skill wise, lighting and stuff ?