Hi. Uh, i'm new here, so don't mind my noob-ness.
I wanted to create a photo that tells a story, and I was going for an escapist/ road trip concept for this shot. Of how we seek an escape from the city life, grab a bike, go somewhere, do nothing.
-Would like feedback on techniques/ concept. Do you guys get the story I'm trying to tell? Or is it a complete fail T.T
-This was a photoshoot ie posed and all, not candid. I'm not a pro I just grab and shot and say, hmm let's try this and go with my 'feel'.
personal thoughts about the image.
-I think it comes across a bit too commercial. My friends were asking me if I'm doing a bike advert. Any ideas how to make it tell a story rather then sell a bike?
All feedbacks appreciated, thanks! =D