gang fight

[htthach]

i know a lot of ppl already play with color pencils
not sure anyone try this

B&W VS Color

bigger one
http://photos1.blogger.com/blogger/6265/1174/1024/Picture 082.jpg

pls comment on the lighting and composition

 

[htthach]

bigger
http://photos1.blogger.com/blogger/6265/1174/1024/Picture 070.jpg

 

[leonzhu]

i like the concept! nice even light. composition wise ai think it might be more oppressive if you pushed the b&w into the corner. Also, maybe if you had shallower DOF? please allow me to try some DI for this picture.

 

[Nerd]

I think the lighting is a bit flat, doesn't give the sense of danger, not particularly highlighting any one of the characters inside. Also I think Pic 2 is better than Pic 1. Perhaps you can try strong directional lighting? Only 1 light source.

 

[htthach]

actually i used a white table light, dun have many lighting equipment in the house.

maybe i should try to borrow a torch for spot light.

@leonzhu: thanks, i think your adjustment make the picture nicer

 

[lenzz]

good thinking.. :thumbsup:

 

[x-iii]

nice concept but would prefer if the colour tones are more vibrant and the foreground isn't so blur until it's quite distracting.

 

[Cliffy]

Try with a white base, instead of that table surface. The colours will stand out much better.