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leonzhu

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i like the concept! nice even light. composition wise ai think it might be more oppressive if you pushed the b&w into the corner. Also, maybe if you had shallower DOF? please allow me to try some DI for this picture.

 

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I think the lighting is a bit flat, doesn't give the sense of danger, not particularly highlighting any one of the characters inside. Also I think Pic 2 is better than Pic 1. Perhaps you can try strong directional lighting? Only 1 light source.
 

htthach

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actually i used a white table light, dun have many lighting equipment in the house.

maybe i should try to borrow a torch for spot light.

@leonzhu: thanks, i think your adjustment make the picture nicer :D
 

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nice concept but would prefer if the colour tones are more vibrant and the foreground isn't so blur until it's quite distracting. ;)
 

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