*Gail*

[Will03]

1

2 the blown skin tone was done on purpose..

3

 

[shocky]

shot #01

Right arms looks scary.
Face abit dark compared to body.
Left hand looks blurred.

Overall

i might consider PS her figure.
Mayb u can consider Brighter red lipstick to match the red lingerie

 

[TMC]

Will!

I dont think you can do anything about the model, but then her arms make her look like an Ethiopian. Composition, swee :thumbsup: I like #3, really brings out the curves.

 

[Luval]

Too skinny for my liking .. shot din turn out well from what i see .

 

[Yawoo]

indeed she looks too skinny... maybe her bf gonna feed her with more good food & tonic to make her a bit.... just that little bit fleshy..haha...:bsmilie: :bsmilie:

 

[alechim]

:bigeyes: ...

Bro, I think you should take more close up like #2, #3 and not wide shots like #1. At least the close up distortion do not make her look too thin like in #1...

If you compare #1 and #2 which are of similar post, the latter do not make Gail look too skinny.

 

[JamYees]

i think it is more so that the model is an amateur and not experienced enough to pose according to her body shape. A lot of models are wafer thin, it all comes down to angle and posture.

 

[StudioFever]

she looks undernourished.lol:bsmilie:

 

[piranas]

She looks perfect!!! Her figure is solid for model;p

 

[Will03]

she looks undernourished.lol:bsmilie:

hey .. dun b mean.......

 

[Will03]

thanks for the comments guys...... will take note....

 

[lemontree]

hmm...should ask her to eat more..imho la..