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What do you think of this pic? Is the surrounding to messy?
C&C are welcome to improve this shot. TIA.

 

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no apparent depth between subject and background - flat. tones and colour are also very close, so makes the contrast even harder to tell. were you too focused on trying to frame the subject?
 

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Trigger Happy said:
no apparent depth between subject and background - flat. tones and colour are also very close, so makes the contrast even harder to tell. were you too focused on trying to frame the subject?
I guess so. Thanks for pointing that out, didn't notice about that though (maybe from my noob eye). Will pay more attention to that next time. Thanks.:thumbsup:
 

shojibake

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Framing wise, the leaves do lead the eyes to the subject. But colour/contrast wise, everything is too flat. What would really work if you're not too against photoshop is to use some of the cross processing actions to tweak the colours.
 

Verywierd

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Perhaps either a) pull back and move the statue a little off centre to make it look like something glimpsed through a hole in the leaves, or b) zoom in a bit more so the the DOF blurs the leaves and "suggests" a frame without being such a strong element of the picture.

Note that I am talking about small adjustments/differences in perspective, not major movements.
 

Broch

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I agree with them, it looks a bit flat. You need to adjust or play with the colors...Goodluck!
 

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