Flower


1ucio

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1. in what area is critique to be sought?
Composition and technique etc

2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
Beauty of nature

3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
Photograph was taken during a trip to bangkok.

4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
I am quite happy with the sharpness and colors achieved
 

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bonrya

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it's a nice clear picture..

one thing you should notice though is that the flower is not 'facing' you. it's tilted slightly downwards.. also the colours a little over saturated to me. the purple turns a little black on my screen..

the background is nicely in the background, but I'll prefer a smoother background to bring out the droplets which (i assume) you're trying to show.

just an example of what i mean: (taken from flickr)


 

1ucio

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Thanks for the tips! I will take more pics of flowers n hopefully can show better results.
 

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