Flower

[cillin]

Pls comment, tks :embrass:

 

[mpenza]

a bit out of focus?

 

[cillin]

Yes, it seem to be not very sharp too, still trying how to use focus properly;p

Maybe these 2 will be slightly better, what do you think?

 

[Goondu]

All these flowers can be found in KK Hospital!

 

[denizenx]

(flamebait mode...)
Uninspired?
try to go beyond these stereotype shots soon...

try better lighting, like maybe an umbrella or "sun wb". the first two very obvious...

the 3rd and 4th looks promising if u change the angle... the lily shoot from lower instead of birdeye? the lavenderish thingy from higher so the white bland sky dun distract...

 

[cillin]

Originally posted by denizenx
(flamebait mode...)
Uninspired?
try to go beyond these stereotype shots soon...

try better lighting, like maybe an umbrella or "sun wb". the first two very obvious...

the 3rd and 4th looks promising if u change the angle... the lily shoot from lower instead of birdeye? the lavenderish thingy from higher so the white bland sky dun distract...

Tks, I will take note and try out

 

[Richard]

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