Flower

[aq12345]

http://img221.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc1228ut5.jpg

Please critique
And...Can someone teach me how to show a picture on forums?

 

[etegration]

 

[babykailan]

which part of the hibiscus are you trying to focus on?
what shutter speed and aperture value are you using?

 

[Sanctus Ignis]

i guess it was shot with a digicam of some sort??
the reds are bleeding quite bad...

 

[yehosaphat]

1) Lack of focus in your subject
2) Messy Background
3) Composition off
4) Over exposed
5) Over saturated
6) Possible handshake

 

[Jesmun18]

1) Lack of focus in your subject
2) Messy Background
3) Composition off
4) Over exposed
5) Over saturated
6) Possible handshake

:bheart:

 

[Jwenz]

anyways,
apart from the other comments..

the two big white colour spot at the left end
are very distracting too.

 

[yehosaphat]

Anyways, dun give up just keep shooting!

 

[stonko]

wow the red is really saturated. abit too much for my liking. try to isolate that hibiscus but choosing a better background, one that is not too cluttered.
The thingy sticking out from the flower ( isit called the pollen or sth?) also OOF.
keep shooting mate!