Flora Flare

[tomato c]

Hi All,

This is virgin post.
Hope to get constructive feedback on this image.
Technic and asthestic how I can improve.
Taken with D70s with macro M 55mm f2.8
Handheld...no tripod yet

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[tltan]

I think handshake or not focused properly.
Also, blown highlights on the top white part.

Nice composition though placing the center of the flower towards the right hand side.
Using a tripod would probably do the job man!

Good luck bro,
tltan

 

[vincenthau]

yup that is what I feel also. you need to use tripod.

The detail is burnt out.

try again and I am sure you can get a better one this time.

cheers

 

[tomato c]

I think handshake or not focused properly.
Also, blown highlights on the top white part.

Nice composition though placing the center of the flower towards the right hand side.
Using a tripod would probably do the job man!

Good luck bro,
tltan

Thanks, noted, although blown, I like its effect.
And yes, I am still working on my hand/eye focus coordination
The sunlight falls partially on the flower, on the white part that is.:sweat:
So there is this huge dynamics range i have to work with....but nothing a S3 PRO
can't handle right....I want one!