Flora Flare


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tomato c

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Hi All,

This is virgin post.
Hope to get constructive feedback on this image.
Technic and asthestic how I can improve.
Taken with D70s with macro M 55mm f2.8
Handheld...no tripod yet :eek:


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tltan

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I think handshake or not focused properly.
Also, blown highlights on the top white part.

Nice composition though placing the center of the flower towards the right hand side.
Using a tripod would probably do the job man!

Good luck bro,
tltan
 

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yup that is what I feel also. you need to use tripod.

The detail is burnt out.

try again and I am sure you can get a better one this time.

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tomato c

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tltan said:
I think handshake or not focused properly.
Also, blown highlights on the top white part.

Nice composition though placing the center of the flower towards the right hand side.
Using a tripod would probably do the job man!

Good luck bro,
tltan
Thanks, noted, although blown, I like its effect.
And yes, I am still working on my hand/eye focus coordination :)
The sunlight falls partially on the flower, on the white part that is.:sweat:
So there is this huge dynamics range i have to work with....but nothing a S3 PRO
can't handle right....I want one!
 

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