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flaemer

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just 2 pics which i wanna share and get comments (good or bad) from the experienced CSers in this part of the forum..... :) would like to improve....



 

Brandon

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I like the first pic. My suggestion is may be you can crop the top part a bit more, the pattern on top left corner is a bit distracting.
The shape of water drop is lovely though :thumbsup:

The second pic is a bit boring for me. Yes it is sharp, the composition is balanced and the exposure is correct. But that's it... Still lacks something.. i can't put in words sorry :sweat:

Thanks for sharing :)
 

EOS500N

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Brandon said:
I like the first pic. My suggestion is may be you can crop the top part a bit more, the pattern on top left corner is a bit distracting.
The shape of water drop is lovely though :thumbsup:

The second pic is a bit boring for me. Yes it is sharp, the composition is balanced and the exposure is correct. But that's it... Still lacks something.. i can't put in words sorry :sweat:

Thanks for sharing :)
wat it lacks is maybe a sunbird resting on it. ;)
 

flaemer

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thanx for ur comments guys.... will improve......

cheers
 

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wat lacks are words in the photos....drop the words on the borders...

put it into the photo...make it a poster,,,

juz my 2cts ..
 

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