Newbie attempt at giving comments..pardon me if these comments are not very constructive..:bsmilie:
#1: Dun like the glare from the sun..or izzit a PP glare?? focus seems to be on the shoulders and not the face..no eye contact
#2: No meaning
#3: Nice bokeh, technically still ok for newbie..but no eye contact again
#4: Too much blur for model behind hence become distraction, model in front shoulders chop..although model look in front..but dun think she's looking at u..
#5: No meaning..should have at least ask the model to glance up at u..
#6: The best one in this series..importance of eye contact can be seen from this pic..but is the pic overexpose or PP job again?? but i still like this best..
#7: Bad angle, bring out the chubby face for the model..but technically this pic is ok.
Most pics look like candid shot, there's no eye contact..the model look a bit lost except #6 and #7
Overall good attempt. Shoot more, shoot more..