first time taking studio shot in school workshop

[makee]

Hi,

I am newbies in photography and i join a studio workshop in my school and took some pictures,hope you all can give comments so that i can improve on it.

 

[eikin]

1. read the posting guidelines for Critique Corner http://forums.clubsnap.org/showthread.php?t=139941

2. learn how to post pictures inside thread http://forums.clubsnap.org/showthread.php?t=94574

 

[makee]

Thanks for point out the rules in the forums..I'm still the newbie

 

[Del_CtrlnoAlt]

OOF & Washout.

DP can fill in the rest. ;p