First time post in CS Wedding section


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jackzhangxiao

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After go into wedding photography for a time. i think this is the time to let others point out my mistakes and areas to improve.

You will never grow if you cannot take others negative comments.

I will keep this thread for a long time and keep update it.

However, due to some privacy issue, i may not post all the pictures.



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ptwong

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maybe u might want to relook at your b/w conversion. Seems a little flat. Maybe can increase the colour channels before u convert it.
 

eleveninth

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mmm don't like the sign in #3.
 

tainted

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Okie for the indian pre wedding series,
I like the first shot, my only grouse is that the skin is smoothened to the point
that its too unnatural.
The face is alright but the upper chest area is smooth to the point that it looks fake.
The BW shot is lacking in tones and is too flat and I'm sure more can be done about it.
Image #3 and 4 both don't work for me.
The green is rather garish and you neglected to straighten your horizon.

Second series is slightly better but can still be improved.
For example you could have posed the bride better and
cloned out part of the lamppost that is sticking out in the right side of the frame.
Image #2 of Brandon & Aveline does not work for me.
I feel that the cropping is too tight to the point that you only have the bride's head
sticking out of the frame.
Image #3 is alright but again the tonality of your BW images could be better.
The highlights are blown, the shadows are too dark;
both of which resulting in loss of details.
Image #4 and 5 are both alright more or less so I'm not going to comment on them.

Thats about all I guess.
Hope you won't take offense with my opinion.
 

jackzhangxiao

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Okie for the indian pre wedding series,
I like the first shot, my only grouse is that the skin is smoothened to the point
that its too unnatural.
The face is alright but the upper chest area is smooth to the point that it looks fake.
The BW shot is lacking in tones and is too flat and I'm sure more can be done about it.
Image #3 and 4 both don't work for me.
The green is rather garish and you neglected to straighten your horizon.

Second series is slightly better but can still be improved.
For example you could have posed the bride better and
cloned out part of the lamppost that is sticking out in the right side of the frame.
Image #2 of Brandon & Aveline does not work for me.
I feel that the cropping is too tight to the point that you only have the bride's head
sticking out of the frame.
Image #3 is alright but again the tonality of your BW images could be better.
The highlights are blown, the shadows are too dark;
both of which resulting in loss of details.
Image #4 and 5 are both alright more or less so I'm not going to comment on them.

Thats about all I guess.
Hope you won't take offense with my opinion.

Thanks ;p;p;p

I think i really need to improve on the BW conversion.

And the skin is smoothed as couple requested.

thank you again for the comments. :heart:
 

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