First shots


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Got my DSLR a couple of weeks ago. One of my first shots.



With my dog as the model.
 

F2point8

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No pic?
Repost it at critique section would be better. Lots of expert there to give comment.
 

DarNikon

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No pics bro. Read how to post a pic and also post in critique section - a lot of useful tips from the experts :)
 

lsisaxon

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Got my DSLR a couple of weeks ago. One of my first shots.

http://lh3.google.com/sgchng/Rxgx4PHegRI/AAAAAAAAAEk/78EHws8bU5o/Venus_0692.jpg

With my dog as the model.
Strange leh.. I quoted this message and there is an active link to a jpg image leh.. I removed the img tags from the original message. When I click on the link, it tells me to download the image instead of displaying it. ;p Then the original image appeared in the first post... Maybe put the image in another server like Photobucket. I never have problems with that..

Anyway, it's a nice shot. Exposure looks ok but you seem to have focused on the nose instead of the eye. It would give a greater impact if the focus were on the eye instead.
 

GavinTing

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Strange leh.. I quoted this message and there is an active link to a jpg image leh.. I removed the img tags from the original message. When I click on the link, it tells me to download the image instead of displaying it. ;p Then the original image appeared in the first post... Maybe put the image in another server like Photobucket. I never have problems with that..

Anyway, it's a nice shot. Exposure looks ok but you seem to have focused on the nose instead of the eye. It would give a greater impact if the focus were on the eye instead.
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bro ... use something easy lah .... like friendster w/o setting to private account ...
 

raptor84

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Nice clean black gorund but for your dog choose a lighter colour as the greay makes it blend in too much. I like the eye contact but you ahve centralised your subject leaving too much space around the eye. Try getteing a little lower and composing it such that the eye is near one of the third's intersections :)
 

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