Uh oh... your friend's father didn't look very amused with what you guys were doing.
Very high contrast picture. If this was the effect you were after then I think it's quite good. Composition is A-ok as far as I'm concerned though I would crop that little rectangle on the bottom right.
The thing that I like really is not the effects but the contrasting expressions of the father and son. Their reaction were spontaneous, very natural.
I would prefer you give this a more creative title.