Faces - 2nd attempt to pose

[sampan]

Hi, this is my second attempt to pose this picture from comments. 1st post was too small. hopefully this time get it right.

This is a cadid shot of my colleague on board a bus, with the sun light through the window. I did some ps to darken right side of the pic.

any suggestion on how you would have done this shot or ps to make it better?

Thanks

 

[eikin]

can i assume that you do not want to continue your first thread? http://forums.clubsnap.com/showthread.php?t=327519

 

[sampan]

can i assume that you do not want to continue your first thread? http://forums.clubsnap.com/showthread.php?t=327519

ty
i just delete the 1st
the pic is 1st thread was too small, I was told.
sry, I newbie

 

[eikin]

you can use CS's gallery for your picture posting actually, that'll be more convenient for embedding the picture into the thread. you can check out the instructions here -> http://forums.clubsnap.com/showthread.php?t=94574

you can find information about posting in critique corner in the stickies found on top of this section.

updated rules -> http://forums.clubsnap.com/showthread.php?t=273376
basic rules -> http://forums.clubsnap.com/showthread.php?t=139941
tip on short writeup -> http://forums.clubsnap.com/showthread.php?t=275677

hope they help

 

[sampan]

thank you for the links.
I will try again.