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eleveninth

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Trying to get it too look like an advert. Something seems off other than the background of course lol.
 

m3lv1nh0

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Do watch out for these:
Highlights is blown.
The background and the reflections on the sunglasses is distracting.
Is that a tie on the shoulder?
 

eleveninth

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Ok! will take note, but what exactly do you mean by highlights. And yea that is a tie. lol
 

flipfreak

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Trying to get it too look like an advert. Something seems off other than the background of course lol.
pls provide a write up for your pic. what is it that the ad is trying to sell? the product focus is way too weak. u need remove the distractions and emphasis more on your product.
 

gpjuson

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Ah... but the product is the eyewear... that's why he named it "eyepatch", eh? ;)

Aside from the background, the face is a bit overexposed, the crumpled palm and what's that reflection? Was that you in shorts? :bigeyes: I'd enlarge somewhat your ad text too.

I like the composition and the expression in the lady's face. Just some more work here and you're well on your way. :thumbsup:
 

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