Dramatic Pose

[tolitz]

Another creation for comments pls!

Pic 01

Pic 02

 

[reachme2003]

I feel no connection with both pics.

 

[Fundee]

try different angle to make it dramatic. . . . . . .

 

[marcwang]

Well... the lighting is decent, though dim.

I felt that the shots, were intended not to be posed, but yet it felt very posed for. Maybe the model tried abit too hard to make it look unposed.