Dont anyhow smoke in Spore!!! Its serious!


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blurman

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:bsmilie: :bsmilie: :bsmilie:
 

philliptan

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Some comments... No offense...

1. Need some spelling/grammatical checks. "torns" = "thorns"... "allow" = "allowed"..."can't" = "Can't"...
2. Illustrations nicely done but sadly it's not funny.

Like to see more though.
 

Del_CtrlnoAlt

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like previously said... illustration is still very 'flat'

if u can do a greyscale background, u can obviously do a greyscale subject... maybe u might wanna practise abit...

also, fonts are too dull, no 'impact' even with the !!! and note that not to join them together, cos like 'all!!!' too closely spaced... look unsightly...

then capitalise the 1 Alphabet after the full stop ( . ) is 'compulsory' in english... oh ya... incase that thingy look like an ass, no offense thou...
 

yanyewkay

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works for me! ahhah my expectations not so high. but grammar needs improvement..
 

blurman

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its ok everyone..i know the standard here from everyone is slightly higher as all are top notch photographer!!

will take note of all the points..no worries...glad u all at least bother to reply and comments..

:D
hpe for more pointers..and hpe u all can also come down to our humble little forum for support (hpe this is not breaking any rules here)
 

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