This is my first post in Critique, I believe I can get more serious comments and feedback as compared to the other galleries in Clubsnap. First and foremost, I would have to apologise in advance for not knowing exactly how to write a good critique thread (and I am referring to the stickies while typing).
Upped the ISO to 400 for a faster shutter speed. Here is a small portion of the EXIF.
F/3.5, 1/640s, 28mm (was the widest I had with me).
This one was shot yesterday, near evening. It's a building I know not what name, but I'm pretty sure many of you here would be able to recognise it anyway. What I wanted to portray from this shot and especially its post processing is to show how 'neglected' the building was. Uncared for and hence becoming dirt-specked. I heard it is no longer in use? Currently, I use Lightroom to do my post processing.
I composed it in a symmetrical manner with 2 reasons. First of all, the buildings around the area had really similar features on each sides, so I felt it might be a good thing to create the symmetry. Secondly, I thought that since the building was a Court, or something likewise, the symmetry can be used to portray fairness in Law, or Justice.
I am looking for feedback in these areas,
1. Composition.
2. My post processing. (Was it too heavy?)
What I did was to push the Clarity (on Lightroom) almost all the way to the maximum, played with the sliders, mainly Blacks, Fill Light, and Saturation. Probably a little of Recovery too. Didn't want the building to appear too yellowish, so I downed the Saturation a little. I raised the Clarity level to the high end to show more details on the bricks, the walls.
Hope I did my Critique correct, always ready to improve it. I'm trying to make a proper correct one. And lastly, thanks all for your time in viewing, reading, and even more for giving your comments and feedback. I'm prepared for the worst. Hope to hear from all.
Upped the ISO to 400 for a faster shutter speed. Here is a small portion of the EXIF.
F/3.5, 1/640s, 28mm (was the widest I had with me).
This one was shot yesterday, near evening. It's a building I know not what name, but I'm pretty sure many of you here would be able to recognise it anyway. What I wanted to portray from this shot and especially its post processing is to show how 'neglected' the building was. Uncared for and hence becoming dirt-specked. I heard it is no longer in use? Currently, I use Lightroom to do my post processing.
I composed it in a symmetrical manner with 2 reasons. First of all, the buildings around the area had really similar features on each sides, so I felt it might be a good thing to create the symmetry. Secondly, I thought that since the building was a Court, or something likewise, the symmetry can be used to portray fairness in Law, or Justice.
I am looking for feedback in these areas,
1. Composition.
2. My post processing. (Was it too heavy?)
What I did was to push the Clarity (on Lightroom) almost all the way to the maximum, played with the sliders, mainly Blacks, Fill Light, and Saturation. Probably a little of Recovery too. Didn't want the building to appear too yellowish, so I downed the Saturation a little. I raised the Clarity level to the high end to show more details on the bricks, the walls.
Hope I did my Critique correct, always ready to improve it. I'm trying to make a proper correct one. And lastly, thanks all for your time in viewing, reading, and even more for giving your comments and feedback. I'm prepared for the worst. Hope to hear from all.
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