Dessert

[Hobbesyeo]

Hi,
Thanks for viewing. I would appreciate any constructive feedback. Thanks!

 

[foxtwo]

is the soft focus intended? it's really distracting.

 

[Hobbesyeo]

hmm... ok. Point noted. Thanks!

 

[rayblade]

Try shooting at different angle & focus hard. You will see the effects.

 

[Hobbesyeo]

ok, how about this version of the same dessert? :think:

 

[sk.images]

The second is better, much better composition, but still looks a little soft to me.

The first one also looks distorted to me

 

[Hobbesyeo]

yeah.. the first one was shot hand-held over the dessert.. so it was kinda hard to make really sure i was directly overhead. I wanted to try a different perspective.

On hindsight, I shld prob have used a smaller aperture than 1.8 (was using 50mm).

The second shot was a more "conventional" angle but I guess DOF was too shallow too.

Thanks for the pointers! :thumbsup:

 

[foxtwo]

ok, how about this version of the same dessert? :think:

screaming out for some light pattern on the plate to take attention away from the tart for just a few seconds.

 

[Hobbesyeo]

screaming out for some light pattern on the plate to take attention away from the tart for just a few seconds.

err... I don't quite understand what you are driving at... :dunno:

 

[germ_boi]

meaning. dont jus focus on the tart. make some side objects which might complement the main product

 

[Hobbesyeo]

meaning. dont jus focus on the tart. make some side objects which might complement the main product

oh ... i see. :think:

Yeah.. the tart does look kinda lonely. Point noted. Thanks!