Dark Window (newbie shot for critique)


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clicknick

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Hi,
critiques, advise, etc, pls feel free to shoot. I only newbie, please teach me. Thanks.

 

ortega

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there is a black rectangle at the bottom,
is this part of the scene?

If it is, you might want to consider a tighter crop and crop it away
it does nothing for the image

the horizontal bar of the lamp post is disturbing the window, so you might want to choose a different pov.
 

espion

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the lamp is blocking the window. more composition can be gotten from the window.
 

clicknick

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Thanks for the comments. Will relook at how to compose this shot again.
 

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