Dangling Bells


Jun 12, 2010
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1. in what area is critique to be sought?
Composition, colours and others

2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
hope to improve and learn more from ppl in here

3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
home decor

4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
the blurring foreground helps to guide the attention to the focus point in the middle
 

Eworms

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Oct 11, 2009
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This photo has potential. But the focus is wrong. I would rather see the sculptures on the bell nearest to the camera on the right. Of course there must be something interesting on the bell to catch my attention. More light should fall on the same bell.
 

enzeru21

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Apr 7, 2010
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just a pic with alot of OOF area and some bells.. nothing attracted the viewer...

maybe can try another angle or sth..
 

indfo

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large portion of the photo is OOF.
The first bell almost occupies 40% of the image and almost blocks the view...

Framing needs a large change here ...
 

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