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Bukit Panjang
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my eye first look at the red then the main object.... or red is ur main object???? nvm nice try....
 

cheekiang

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does your red background means 'danger'???

hoho....nice try....

chee kiang
 

eikin

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good use of rectilinear shapes to lead the viewer to the warning signboard, and the connection of the red colour is commendable. however there's nothing much beyond the superficial shape and colours to make a meaningful abstract.
 

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limyouliang : Yes, that's part of what I intended.

cheekiang : Getting warmer.

eikin : Quite right - I felt something lacking too. Any suggestions to make this more meaningful?
 

espion

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may work as a study in textures and light: contrast the rough red against the grainy black. But you need perfect alignment of the horizontal and vertical and you have to patch or crop away the entire danger sign as it is too distracting for such a minimalist approach.
 

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