- Apr 28, 2008
1. in what area is critique to be sought?
Composition - The cupcake intended as the subject is more or less positioned in the centre. Not sure if composition could be improved in any way. Would be glad to hear comments.
Also not sure if the top portion showing parts of the box should be cropped off and a top/bottom black border added would improved the presentation.
2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
To show the creativity and appeal of cupcakes. They look more like works of art than food. Btw, it tastes pretty good too !
3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
Taken at a Baby Shower celebration.
4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
Felt more could be done to improve the photo given such a colourful subject. Not sure if bokeh could be improved as well.