Hello,
I need critiques for this image. (From my APAD)
1) I am trying to portray the child engrossed and concentrated in what he is doing. And to add a little twist. I decided to add blur to the picture. Blur concentration.
2) Does the B&W with the blur work for you in this picture? Do you think there is too much blur? I'm also trying to tell people, not only sharp pictures are nice, blur, OOF pictures can as well.
3) Do you think this composition is good? I composed this way is because I wanted his two legs to cover the 2 sides of the bottom-left corner. And wanted to allow viewers to see what he was doing as well as his face expression, which in this case, should be concentration.
4) I actually think the picture doesn't really give the really concentrated feeling. What do you think?
Thank you people.
I need critiques for this image. (From my APAD)
1) I am trying to portray the child engrossed and concentrated in what he is doing. And to add a little twist. I decided to add blur to the picture. Blur concentration.
2) Does the B&W with the blur work for you in this picture? Do you think there is too much blur? I'm also trying to tell people, not only sharp pictures are nice, blur, OOF pictures can as well.
3) Do you think this composition is good? I composed this way is because I wanted his two legs to cover the 2 sides of the bottom-left corner. And wanted to allow viewers to see what he was doing as well as his face expression, which in this case, should be concentration.
4) I actually think the picture doesn't really give the really concentrated feeling. What do you think?
Thank you people.