Do you want a harsh critique or a suger-filled one? :bsmilie:
Ok, I'll go in between :bsmilie:
1. What's the idea behind this piece? That way, people can better critique or give comments to your picture.
2. Technically wise, proportions of the girl is off. Will go into detail if you want to know.. too lazy to type out now :bsmilie: Positioning of hat looks wierd. Doesn't look like she's wearing it.. shift it down a little on her head. There's not enough focus in the picture.
3. Style wise, I feel that it isn't consistent. If you want to have cell-shaded graphics, do the same for everything in the pic.
4. The girl doesn't look like she's standing correctly on the mountain slope..
5. Where's the sun for her shadow to be casted?
(Btw, her shadow shouldn't be grey.. it should be a dark green)
6. Add more details!