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Diawhey

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Jan 3, 2011
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http://www.facebook.com/photo.php?pid=6978407&l=2a87d3399b&id=580365875

1.in what area is critique to be sought?
Composition & lighting

2.what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
B&W old photo effect

3.under what circumstance is the picture taken?
Noon, sunny day

4.what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture.
I think something is missing in my photo.
 

foxtwo

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Mar 11, 2004
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This is like a holiday picture, or those store-bought postcard even. Where's the foreground, mid-ground & background composition? I think you know where I'm going.
 

Rashkae

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Nov 28, 2005
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You should learn very quickly that Facebook is NOT a good place to host pictures. Also, you need to learn how to properly link images. We have detailed newbies guides for you to read and learn.

As for the picture, it's not bad, but now "wow". Like you said, something is missing. Did you try going around the other side? Did you try taking pictures from other angles, so the you don't "chop through" the tree? Did you try different angles, like something close to the columns, angled upwards, showimg them reaching towards the sky?
 

Diawhey

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Jan 3, 2011
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@rashkae, thank you! Next time i will paste it in proper link! Anyway, yes i also captured some of those. Thanks for help guys! Appreciate it! ;)
 

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