Colour My Life


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jmsjc

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*EDIT* Photo comes out abit grainy here. -Changed the pic to a smaller one with flickr.

Take a look here instead.

http://www.flickr.com/photos/22898640@N04/2197709907/

Comments and Criticism please.

Taken with a HP Photosmart R407 that i have to make do with now.

Its a 4.1mp camera. but oh well.

Saving for a dslr now. haha.

Cheers
James:)
 

Mar 24, 2004
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the orange bit on the top right distracts my attention from the colour pencils.:)
 

lastboltnut

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Try not to place the interesting portion (aka the colourful pencil tips in this case) right in the center of the pic.....use rule of third.:) Now a tighter crop with good placement of the tips can still be done.:) UP the contrast a bit too.
 

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The orange thing in the background is kinda distracting, and you could ahve used a tighter crop of only focusing on the pencils and lesser depth of field, other than that, its nice ;)
 

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