Cloud


bullseyez

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#1
1. in what area is critique to be sought?
Trying to improve some skill and composition and also PP.
2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
The sky with cloud
3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
was in a bus and saw this scene
4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
after PP i found it quite nice

 

daredevil123

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Oct 25, 2005
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#3
Some stuff is over done. I think too much contrast is added. The cloud looks radioactive. The blue of the sky is too dark with the cloud being so bright. And there is a lot of noise in the blues. And the tree is just in the way of everything.

Better luck next time..
 

ovaltinemilo

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Sep 12, 2009
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#4
just my view...I feel the contrast is too much..sky so dark yet clouds can be so bright.. the chroma noise is too obvious...:)
 

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