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shuee88

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don't know if i am posting at the correct area... just find it quite abstract for me...

comments for improvement is much appreciated.

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calebk

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Is there a reason why the top bamboo pole is cut off? Sloppy composition...
 

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hmm... the top bamboo is nt cut off but the sock like thingy is cut off abit because of my lens.. i am using a 80-200mm and there is a minmum focal length i can shoot at. so a bit too near frm me the bamboo, at 2nd floor i think, so it is cut off lo... thanks for ur comments... maybe u can gimme some suggestion for improvement?
 

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hmm... the top bamboo is nt cut off but the sock like thingy is cut off abit because of my lens.. i am using a 80-200mm and there is a minmum focal length i can shoot at. so a bit too near frm me the bamboo, at 2nd floor i think, so it is cut off lo... thanks for ur comments... maybe u can gimme some suggestion for improvement?
Hmm it is awkward to have the clothing from the top bamboo cut off halfway. Perhaps it would be better if it was complete, and you can place the entry of the top pole into the frame at the 2/3 mark of the left border. If you notice, the lower pole is at the 1/3 mark of the bottom border, so since you have two subjects, it is better to make the composition slightly more even.
 

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