Chiong ah...


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Aug 7, 2009
Thomas More's Vision

1. in what area is critique to be sought?

The composition of this photo. I know the lighting isn't very good, because this idea was pretty last-minute and we made use of the limited flashguns we had... And the distortion of the head is very obvious.. I know... Oh and, I think I could have held my camera higher... but I was literally lying flat on the floor..

2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?

The chionging effect... I think those long shutter speed chionging photos are quite.. erm, boring. No offense to anyone. So I wanted to try something new.

3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)

Need for speed. If I remember correctly, we had to submit the photos by 5 or 6pm and my friends and I were so damn hungry at that time. And God, the floor there was so damn cold. I was feeling real uncomfortable at that point in time.

4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
This photo could have been better if had brought more flashguns and if I held my camera higher. Lol.

P.S. I did not submit this photo in the end as I really find the distortion very disturbing. I submitted this instead.


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