Chained.....


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jasonhung

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1. in what area is critique to be sought?
Composition, Story telling Photo

2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
Showing the "toughness" n "link" of the chain

3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
Cloudy day along Changi Broadway, Walking alone with loads in mind.

4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
Unknown elements lacking in photo, added in the wordings hoping to "fill" in the mood
 

nysheng

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why do u have two identical threads?

pls post a bigger picture..easier for us to see.

 

nysheng

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is there a deeper meaning u r trying to convey?

i only get a feeling of a chain that's very old. rather than being 'tied down'

is that what u r trying to show?

oh..and is it just me..or is the focusing just that slight bit off..i'm having trouble looking at the details in the chain..:think:
 

chrisjohn

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yeah maybe a little sharp bokeh? i think the black framing you did here really constricts the photograph.
 

night86mare

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another case of attaching your emotions to the picture too much, and then expecting everyone else to feel as you do..

try not to do that. :)
 

wkteoh

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another case of attaching your emotions to the picture too much, and then expecting everyone else to feel as you do..

try not to do that. :)
Agreed. Nice textures on the chain, but by itself it does not tell a story.
 

daredevil123

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This might work a little better in black and white, with more details and textures.

The words do not work at all, neither did the black outer frame.
 

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