i think your first picture is the strongest. But the model does help alot in your final work because she looks good.. Aesthetically u still have alot of work to be done. Try looking beyond just shooting a "portrait". Look at the post on babe in water by hacker http://forums.clubsnap.org/showthread.php?t=220222
I think the pictures shot by hacker looks more real than the pictures which u have taken because u try to put your own perception of how a portrait should look like when working with your model.
The end result u get is static feel in your work. They lack emotions and personality. I hope u don't take this personally.. Just felt that I could give u some useful pointers.
I like the last 3 shots, very nice composition, very balanced exposure, and like the colour balance as well. really impressive, keep it up, hope to see u again in future shoots!
Aesthetically u still have alot of work to be done. Try looking beyond just shooting a "portrait". Look at the post on babe in water by hacker http://forums.clubsnap.org/showthread.php?t=220222
I think the pictures shot by hacker looks more real than the pictures which u have taken because u try to put your own perception of how a portrait should look like when working with your model.
The end result u get is static feel in your work. They lack emotions and personality. I hope u don't take this personally.. Just felt that I could give u some useful pointers.
I like the last 3 shots, very nice composition, very balanced exposure, and like the colour balance as well. really impressive, keep it up, hope to see u again in future shoots!