Caterpillar close-up

[hhho]

Hi! This is a close-up and front view of caterpillar chewing leaf

I would like to seek your comments on the following

DOF
lighting
composition
overall impression or wow factor
any other comments to improve it better

Personally, I like this photo very much and just hope to improve it further

Thank you very much.

 

[zac08]

DOF is a bit too shallow, picture is not sharp, guessing that it's due to movement.
Big brown bloob is distracting on the top right....

 

[hongwei]

DOF = too shallow, out of focus
lighting = still ok
composition = good
overall impression or wow factor = would be good if it is sharp enough
any other comments to improve it better = Nil