broken seal

[luisg]

comments welcome.. is this sharp enough? any suggestion on how to improve this shot? lighting?

thanks!

 

[tomshen]

Background!

 

[luisg]

hehehe ok thanks!
just playing around with my cam that day, nothing to shoot, background is the clubsnap website!

 

[Flare]

You need a cleaner background... club snap website is ok... but the green dangling things are distracting to me... Look for more interesting angles and perspective.... try lighting from different angles (a table lamp will do)

Personally, I feel that it's a little under exposed...... maybe because of the background...... a little darker than my liking...

My 2 cents