1. In what area is critique to be sought?
Please comment on the color and composition (or else).
2. What one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
I wanted to show that the bridge is going to the horizon. But, where's the horizon? Like the U2's song, no line on the horizon. Well in this picture, there's a slight line on the horizon.
3. Under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
It is a cloudy Monday morning in Ancol Beach, Jakarta. Monday? It was August 17th, I was on a holiday. All Indonesian are on holiday. It's our Independence Day.
4. What the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture?
Hmmm... I guess the person on the bridge who is turning his head to the left compromises the composition. The bridge lead to the boat on the horizon. But, his head screw the composition by directing viewer to the other side.