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microcosm

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The lighting is a little too harsh and unflattering to the bike, and also, watch out for distortion, in the case of the rear tyre. Looks warped. Lovely bike. Post work a little heavy but works if you wanted to bring out the sky.

But what bothers me is the perspective distortion and the composition. Might want to shoot a tight cropped shot or give it more space to show the environment the bike was in at that time. Cheers.
 

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The lighting is a little too harsh and unflattering to the bike, and also, watch out for distortion, in the case of the rear tyre. Looks warped. Lovely bike. Post work a little heavy but works if you wanted to bring out the sky.

But what bothers me is the perspective distortion and the composition. Might want to shoot a tight cropped shot or give it more space to show the environment the bike was in at that time. Cheers.
thank u very much for ur honest comments and i will try work on ur criticism next time. :) cheers.
 

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