Blue Hour.


waladjam

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Ricoh GRII APS-C size CMOS compact digicam + GW-3 Wide Conversion Lens

Your c & c would be helpful and appreciated. Thank you.

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pinholecam

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My few cents :

1. Exposure : I think its at least 1.5 stops too dim. Next time, try a few exposures of the scene. If not, you can still raise this one in the raw converter.

2. Composition : Building to the left a bit too big and makes the viewer take attention to it, but it does not have much to offer visually. So the composition looks un-balanced.
 

ranchy

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not really an expert. but i think Pinholecam sums up most of the point.

The two structure to the left is quite distracting.

Do share more images of your future shots too :)
 

waladjam

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My few cents :

1. Exposure : I think its at least 1.5 stops too dim. Next time, try a few exposures of the scene. If not, you can still raise this one in the raw converter.

2. Composition : Building to the left a bit too big and makes the viewer take attention to it, but it does not have much to offer visually. So the composition looks un-balanced.
Noted with thanks.
 

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