Bleak.


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Junyi-

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Hi everyone Im new here, so forgive me if I fail to abide by the guidelines (although Ill try my best).

This shot was taken on a cloudy evening. Personally, I was attempting to convey a sense of forlorn and darkness through this shot.
The subject is erm, everything beyond the black, natural 'frame', I guess. I literally committed a 'point-and-shoot' when taking it...
Methinks this is trash, but its the best of what I have. My gallery is sad );
Any feedback on whether any emotion is evoked is greatly appreciated though,
Along with any on photographic composition...

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Camera: Leica V-LUX 1
Exposure: 0.005 sec (1/200)
Aperture: f/4.5
Focal Length: 7.4 mm
ISO Speed: 400

Thank you for reading. :)
 

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What is your thoughts on the foreground? What are they related to the background? IMHO, I can't comprehend your theme.
 

king2penn

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Hi, Junyi... Welcome to clubsnap... In ur post u mentioned about conveying a sense of forlorn and darkness through ur shot. The photo is not too badly done, but it could be improved perhaps by giving a more dramatic prespective and by isolating a single subject in the shot, such as the chair. The framing emcompasses far too many subjects and it would be better to just concentrate on a few...
 

Junyi-

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photo.cavendish
Heh no idea. Like I said, it was literally point and shoot...


king2penn
Hi,
Yeah Ill keep the single subject in mind next time, thank you very much...
 

CreaXion

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Location not very correct in the first place. Hence the bleak appearance is insufficient.
 

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