Big Thoughts in a Small Pool


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sslow

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Hi all,
This is my first post in ClubSnap.
Please provide comments on composition and any other areas.
Thanks.

 

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sslow said:
Hi all,
This is my first post in ClubSnap.
Please provide comments on composition and any other areas.
The composition works for me. I wouldn't call it a great piece of art, but it is a nice snapshot that makes me smile. The mom(?)&kid in the background help IMHO to create some context and contrast to the expression of the boy in the foreground.

What I don't like is the colour balance, somehow the colours look wrong/unreal to me.
 

philliptan

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I think the colours have been over-saturated. Look at the blue glow around the faces in the background.

If you go lower, that could help... because from your angle, there's a big empty space between the boy and the two figures behind.
 

seeyf

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Personally I feel that the two figures behind are rather distracting since they sort of compete with the boy for the viewer's attention. Maybe cropping them out would work better.
 

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too much distance between the boy and the backgd figures; unbalanced pic.
 

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