Bee Macro


HazeMaze

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1. in what area is critique to be sought?
Color and Composition.

2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
Show the hardworking side of a bee and how's the process is done.

3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
Went Sentosa Flower on a sunny day for some flower shot, instead spotted a few bees collecting pollen. Took this shot without flash as the sun is bright and hot. My first time looking at bee in a near distance as I usually walk away from it because it sting. Wanted to show that they are born a hardworking insect instead of a bug with sting.

4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
I think it's too saturated. That's all.

 

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AnsQ

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Hi HazeMaze,

Your Flickr sharing settings for your linked photo is set to "private", and can't be seen from your link.
 

HazeMaze

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Hi HazeMaze,

Your Flickr sharing settings for your linked photo is set to "private", and can't be seen from your link.
Thanks for reminding.

Uploading thur CS gallery.
 

Justintime

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hihi

just wanted to say that its a pleasing macro, at least for me :D

Now sure if it helps but it seems a tiny bit underexposed. Don't really feel that its oversaturated (at least on my screen), the bee looks like it could help with a little more contrast & saturation. Flower parts seems vibrant enough though.

My 2 cents & u deserve credit for nailing this shot :)
 

HazeMaze

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Justintime said:
hihi

just wanted to say that its a pleasing macro, at least for me :D

Now sure if it helps but it seems a tiny bit underexposed. Don't really feel that its oversaturated (at least on my screen), the bee looks like it could help with a little more contrast & saturation. Flower parts seems vibrant enough though.

My 2 cents & u deserve credit for nailing this shot :)
Noted, Thanks.

Keep it coming, my first macro experience. :)
 

HighTone

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I'm also just beginning to try Macro, I think you got it nice.
 

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