Babygirl in the playing in the water


szone

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1. in what area is critique to be sought?
Exposure and lightings
2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
trying to capture the moment when babygirl is playing @ the pool.
3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
Took this @ in the morning around 10+ at the zoo water theme park where I saw this cute little girl enjoying the water spray all around her.
4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
Nice facial expression of the moment.
 

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Lawlyh

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Oct 10, 2010
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Hi,

I think the picture is a little underexposed on the "facial" expression portion of it. However, I can see the girl in the picture is clearing enjoying the moment. Just my two cents worth. Please do comment on my post as well. Thanks.:)
 

daredevil123

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The crop looks too abrupt, cutting the girl off at the shin. It would be nice to see the girl's feet.

I also feel there is too much useless space above the girl's head. Try to go tighter on the shot. No need to capture too much of the spray, as long as the view can see drops of water everywhere, the viewer will know there is a jet spray of water. What is more important is the girl's expression.
 

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