b&W ClosE up BicYcLe modElS

[pRoLoS3r]

Hope I post it in the right forum. If its wrong ... mafan moderator to move it.

My first attempt on shooting abtract.

If possible pls help C&C, It will be of great help to help me improve ^_^.

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[pRoLoS3r]

#6

Thank you for viewing. Your help is much appreciated.

 

[Rev]

1 is the strongest of the set... very nice, the tones & wire-frame detail are nicely captured
2 is a nice abstract impressionist take
3, 4 & 5 are too messy and the shapes of the bikes become lost with the film, OOF or blurriness...
6 has a nice sombre mood but feel the bright light source could be at a better position... the background with the furniture is distracting as well...

my 2 cts... but I like to keep things simple =)

 

[pRoLoS3r]

Thanks alot Rev.

I will take note of the pointers ^_^ and improve on the next shoot . .

Anyone else who have comments, do come forward and post . THanks in advance