Art Science Museum.


Feb 11, 2012
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[/url] D1010012 by HANJG, on Flickr[/IMG]


1. in what area is critique to be sought?
Mainly Composition. Feel free to air any thoughts that you have.
2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
Bring something unique to the table.
3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
I was damn tired from walking around with my tripod and camera.
4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
Its a nice picture :) Enjoy the beauty of it!
 

thoongeng

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Jan 26, 2010
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interesting angle :)

was thinking if shooting it a split-second earlier and the full silhouette of the person can be seen may be better

thanks for sharing!
 

nedy77

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Jun 21, 2005
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It'll be better if the top( I think it's the roof) didn't overlap with the boys head

Now it looks as if there's something growing out of the boy's head

Otherwise it's a good concept
 

May 28, 2010
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but i focus more on the boy than ASM..
its quite distracting..
maybe you can try longer exposure and make some "trails" from them, wider shots too..
 

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