Areas in Punggol


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foxguy

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Joint a group for outting got to many a few friends and got some newbs shoots to show
no PP only resizing
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2
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3 busy ants
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4 lalangs (hope i got the spelling right)
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5 a escape route if only i could fit in
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6 a spot of light my fav at the house
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8
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11 lonely man
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12 crossing paths
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13 lonely man 2
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16 the end
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ok guys and gal, u know who u are, start putting them here. :p
 

bro,

sorry, who are u huh? r u gilbert?

jay the blur
 

yap :p
 

i newb la dun bully me la :p
C&C are most welcome
 

probably white balance issues, something like fluorescent

anyways; in a lot of photos, horizon is tilted, please correct it, not that hard

keep shooting! there are really too many photos for me to comment, to be honest.. but in general the composition is not very strong
a good way to improve, in my opinion, is to be highly self-critical. for me, i delete every shot before PP that i think composition is not there
this way i save myself a lot of time with regards to pp'ing and also, i find out what sort of shots should be taken
 

filter was used. :p playing with colour filter.
 

filter was used. :p playing with colour filter.

hope you dun mind me saying that. i think starting off with working of subjects (i.e. exploring subjects that appeal to you), achieving compositional impact and getting the main body exposure is priority over colors and tonal distribution. play with filters, panning and motion is what many people start to get excited about initially, me too, but i find that they dun derive much effects without getting some other factors concrete first. i can see your efforts in exploration, some of the pictures shows much potential becos it shows you try to see things alternatively, although they are not solidly taken as an overall per picture and dun glue together as a series.
 

hope you dun mind me saying that. i think starting off with working of subjects (i.e. exploring subjects that appeal to you), achieving compositional impact and getting the main body exposure is priority over colors and tonal distribution. play with filters, panning and motion is what many people start to get excited about initially, me too, but i find that they dun derive much effects without getting some other factors concrete first.

thanks i will take note.
 

probably white balance issues, something like fluorescent

anyways; in a lot of photos, horizon is tilted, please correct it, not that hard

keep shooting! there are really too many photos for me to comment, to be honest.. but in general the composition is not very strong
a good way to improve, in my opinion, is to be highly self-critical. for me, i delete every shot before PP that i think composition is not there
this way i save myself a lot of time with regards to pp'ing and also, i find out what sort of shots should be taken

thanks i will take note,
btw i already took out a lot of pictures. i need to shoot more and learn more.
thanks again
 

in fact, the first two pictures give me some idea. half-half in such cases may not work per picture, but if you can do many takes of it, with good colors, you can collage them together as a grid.
 

hope you dun mind me saying that. i think starting off with working of subjects (i.e. exploring subjects that appeal to you), achieving compositional impact and getting the main body exposure is priority over colors and tonal distribution. play with filters, panning and motion is what many people start to get excited about initially, me too, but i find that they dun derive much effects without getting some other factors concrete first. i can see your efforts in exploration, some of the pictures shows much potential becos it shows you try to see things alternatively, although they are not solidly taken as an overall per picture and dun glue together as a series.

can use some picture i shot to give an example? i dun mind my shots to be edited in anyway.

same to night86mare

please share more on how i can improve.
 

in fact, the first two pictures give me some idea. half-half in such cases may not work per picture, but if you can do many takes of it, with good colors, you can collage them together as a grid.

what you meant by collage? stacking photos on each other?
 

Think the rest has mentioned, your photos either lack a strong subject matter, need to work on composition, exposure (day shots got a lot of blown highlights, while later shots quite under).

Shoot more, but spend time thinking about your subject matter and composition before you taking the shot.
 

Err, you went into Matilda's House? How did you manage to do so? As for the shots, hehe, i not that level to comment. :)
 

Think the rest has mentioned, your photos either lack a strong subject matter, need to work on composition, exposure (day shots got a lot of blown highlights, while later shots quite under).

Shoot more, but spend time thinking about your subject matter and composition before you taking the shot.

thanks for your comments,

one thing i wanted ask, the blown higlights were take with aperture priority.
while the under were manual,
i found i like the under more as it gave a better sunsetting.
how do you alll normally shoot landscape?
please correct me or comment.
thanks again.
 

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